Intro in coffee shop:
Holly says 'I'm sorry' and sit's staring at coffee cup (over the shoulder shot)
The guy that she's with gets up and leaves (wide angle)
Side shot of Holly (focus changes onto a happy couple in the background).
Holly looks over and smiles sadly and sings first verse.
Holly says 'I'm sorry' and sit's staring at coffee cup (over the shoulder shot)
The guy that she's with gets up and leaves (wide angle)
Side shot of Holly (focus changes onto a happy couple in the background).
Holly looks over and smiles sadly and sings first verse.
Verse 1 - coffee shop shoot
Summer comes and winter fades, (Holly - close up)
Summer comes and winter fades, (Holly - close up)
Here we are just the same,
We don't need pressure, we don't need
change,
Let's not give the game away. (Holly
looks over again)
(Cuts to girl and boy) There used to be
an empty space,
A photograph without a face, (girl
smiles at boy)
But with your presence with your grace,
(boy takes girls hand)
Everything falls into place. (Focus
goes to Holly as she leaves)
Chorus - Capstone shoot (field)
Please don't say you love me, (sitting
on fence, mid shot)
'cause I might not say it back, (mid
close up of Holly)
Doesn't mean my heart stopped skipping
when you look at me like that. (Look straight into camera)
There’s no need to worry when you see
just where we're at. (Close up of guitar)
Just please don't say you love me (mid
close up)
'cause I might not say it back. (Close
up of Holly’s face looking straight at camera)
(Jump down off the fence)
(Shot of Holly's feet landing on floor)
(Shot of Holly's hand as she leans
guitar against fence
Verse 2 - Capstone shoot (by pond)
Heavy words (Holly walks past couple)
are hard to take (camera pans to couple and they become the focus)
Under pressure precious things will
break, (mid shot of another boy smiling at girl)
How we feel is hard to fake, (she looks
back to boyfriend as he looks round to the boy)
So let’s not give the game away. (turns
back round to girl looking angry and walks away)
Instrumental (mid shot of boy and girl arguing)
Boy walks away and is left looking upset on her own.
Instrumental (mid shot of boy and girl arguing)
Boy walks away and is left looking upset on her own.
Chorus - Capstone shoot (field)
Please don't say you love me, (Holly
walking through field, hands feeling the corn)
'cause I might not say it back, (close
up of Holly’s face)
Doesn't mean my heart stopped skipping
when you look at me like that. (Look up at sky and look sad)
There’s no need to worry when you see
just where we're at. (See boy’s silhouette walking towards her from the
distance)
Just please don't say you love me (Holly’s
face is confused but happy)
'cause I might not say it back. (A
flower falls out of Holly’s hand and onto the floor)
Bridge - School hall Prom shoot
Fools rush in. (Boy and Girl walk in -
girl still angry, boy wanting to make it up to her)
I've been the fool before, (cuts to
Holly under the gazebo, fairy lights off)
This time I'm gonna slow down,
'cause I think this could be more,
The thing I'm looking for. (Holly looks
over to see them come in the room)
Chorus
Please don't say you love me, (boys
hands uncover girls eyes)
'cause I might not say it back, (shot
of gazebo as the lights come on)
Doesn't mean my heart stopped skipping
when you look at me like that. (Cuts to Girl smiling and Boy and walking
towards her)
There’s no need to worry when you see
just where we're at. (Boy and Girl embrace/dance)
Just please don't say you love me, (Boy
& and girl kiss)
'cause I might not say it back. (Boy
& and girl leave)
Please don't say you love me, (Holly
see's them leave and reaches into her pocket and looks up - crane)
'cause I might not say it back,
(Picture drops) (close up of picture)
Back to Field Shoot
Doesn't mean my heart stopped skipping
when you look at me like that. (Holly starts to walk into the distance towards
the boy)
Back to Gazebo Shoot
There’s no need to worry when you see
just where we're at. (High angle of Holly and picture)
Just please don't say you love me,
(Holly drops to floor)
'cause I might not say it back. (Holly
looks at picture then smiles)
Last Line - Back to Field shoot
Just please don't say you love me cause
I might not say it back (crane shot - Holly takes boys hand and walks away -
out of focus as they leave) FADE TO BLACK.
As we have been going along, we have been changing things and adapting things to make it work better. Things such as changing Amy from actor to camera operator and Holly from camera operator to actor. Also, we have changed some shots and locations around to fit the storyline better.
ReplyDeleteThis is highly detailed and impressive. A lot of thought has gone into this. Well done!
ReplyDeleteSome of your font choices are not so good. The black on dark grey is very difficult to read.